@ElectroBongo good idea, i'll definitely try something with less attack for the bell melody. Something about that instrument hasn't felt quite right. @Decktonic @Menty Deluxe Agree that it takes a while for the excitement to build up. Think i will shorten the intro, or redo parts of it. Thanks for the feedback everyone, really appreciate it!

Good Energy build up in the middle part. I love the synth filter evolve in the third main part combined with the energetic rhythm section. this track takes some time to really shine, maybe you can trim the intro a little for faster attention (This could be some part of the flatness @Decktonic mentioned) . I can second @ElectroBongo for the Giorgio Moroder reference but more from his current daft punk album track. Overall this track sounds great, I think this is one of those "getting better overtime you listening to" track :)

Nice track, good synth work

Love the progress so far!

I love the vibe and the arrangement but there's something about it that feels like it's not quite there yet. It's a little flat. I can't put it into words but I think if you keep hammering away at it, it will get there.

You know, the best tracks are simple. But we know they aren't simple. I really dig the harmonies, as well as the arps in the background and those old school toms. And you need that bell melody in the first and second stanza, but could try another instrument; for example, something with a little less attack and a little more reverb based on the chord structure. I really enjoyed listening to this. It reminded me of Giorgio Moroder's soundtrack for American Gigolo. Nice stuff.

@Menty Deluxe @ElectroBongo @Decktonic @D/ΔЯKИST what do you guys think?

thanks @monochromeecho!

Great work. Love the bass at 2:00...

It's getting there