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109.29 MB(10 files)
138 BPM
9 Audio, 34 Midi tracks
Progress:Rough Draft
This is my first song Cloudscape, needless to say there are some things to fix. Any and all Creative Criticism is welcome.
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Santiago Frias9 years ago
Like to collaborate? Cant Pull the project.
Joseph Alanko9 years ago
Sorry you requested comments in Coursera and I placed them here but now I can't find your posting in Coursera. I am not sure how to delete them from here either. Doesn't look like that is an option.
Joseph Alanko9 years ago
Well, I just spent 15 minutes typing my thoughts and it didn't take. So here is the abbreviated version. Start at around 25 seconds (going from memory here). Beat up to then wasn't as engaging as after 25 seconds. Also the single drum beat at the end didn't work for me. Great tension during the first part up to 3:30?. Lack of drum beat after that sort of lost the flow. About one minute later the drum beat picks up and engages listener again. Tension in the final part (7:00?) not as powerful as the excellent job done in the first part. Maybe look at that again. Note these are just things that stood out for me. If you like it as it is then don't change anything.
Bill Fox Sofras9 years ago
nice work mate
Tranzparenz9 years ago⚑
This song is mostly finished, i'm wanting to hear what everyone has to say first
Tranzparenz9 years ago⚑
This song is mostly finished, i'm wanting to hear what everyone has to say first
Santiago Frias9 years ago
Pulled this project.