Looking for some percussion to be added to this in particular. It's extremely fun to play live with some massive metal-style drums behind it, so something acoustic could be great. Preferably not just straight double-bass type metal, but something intricate and complex. However an electronic beat could work as well. Something aggressive, I imagine going down a heavy industrial vein with it. As it is, the vocals stick out a bit in their belligerence. I don't think they need to be toned back; they just need something big and daunting behind them, backing them up and supporting their demeanor. As always, I'm glad to hear something original/unusual/experimental. But these are all just suggestions! I'd be glad to hear anything you got! It could also stand to be filled out with some synths or anything else you want to do to it, so have at it!