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20.53 MB(3 files)
101 BPM
4 Audio, 3 Midi tracks
Progress:Ready
This is my first remix of one of my original raps called "Ancestral clock (boom bop)" off my debut album. The break beat I used is classic Billy Squier in "The Big Beat" which I got hype over via "Fix up Look Sharp" by Dizzie Rascal. I had a lot of fun making this, took me a whole day of sitting on my ass and a coffee by my side. I could do this forever.
here's the link: https://blend.io/project/54e64705093e7e7f24006280
Please, please please give me any comments, feedback, and especially constructive criticism. I really grow that way.
Kim
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Yovelin Florentino9 years ago
I like it... And also agree with Kurt Kleine... Checking levels won't hurt the track... Voices should be heard clearly... Other than that, I love your work in this track as well as the others... You are very creative, and I really value that. Much Luv...
Kimmortal9 years ago
@Kurt Kleine thank you so much for your feedback! I'll definitely be checking my volume controls!
Eleven 11 Studio9 years ago
HI Kimmortal, I listened to your song and read some of the other reviews. I agree much with what @Lenny said, mostly regarding the voice. Not so sure about the snair thing. Looking at the waveform it seems like the snair is loud and personally think it is the guitar that is lacking. I guess you can check your volumes in Live. Good job on your project. Kurt
Kimmortal9 years ago
@Lenny thank you so much for your feedback! i really appreciate this! i will definitely work on bringing my vocals up to be more present.
Sun/sin9 years ago
great stuff, really digging the use of your voice! and guitar added in there. Nice!
Lenny9 years ago
hi Kimmortal! This is really good! I know you want cc so let me add a few things. I think the snare could be snappier, it has a great panning effect to it but I'd like to hear more snap to it. Also the vocals are great, I think they should come forward more. They seem to be pushed back a little, from all the great voices I enjoy the voice seems to be more prominent. I think you have a great voice and bringing it out more in the mix would make it more present and I believe that's where most of the character is. Would be cool to hear the little details and imperfections in the vocals. Really good stuff. Thanks also for the comment!
Kimmortal9 years ago
yep that's me :) @Lukaas thanks for listening!
Lukaas9 years ago
Like the guitar track, is that you?
Lukaas9 years ago
#hiphop
Andrew Murphy9 years ago
Need to keep an eye on the master gain, it's clipping. Really like the arrangement and vocals. Good work.
Skowster (Colin Skow)9 years ago
Great retro breakbeat, it really goes with the vocals... Love it!
Kimmortal9 years ago⚑
new arrangement
Kimmortal9 years ago⚑
changed order of the song a bit more
Kimmortal9 years ago⚑
needs more wrk but gettin thereee
Yaroslav9 years ago
Pulled this project.